For Middle Grade Writers Who Want
More Than Metrics
You’ve run your chapter through ProWritingAid—and now you’ve got data. Lots of it.
But what do you do with a style score of 73%? Or a pacing spike in paragraph four? Or that passive voice flag that doesn’t feel quite right?
If you’re revising a middle grade manuscript and want help turning the numbers into narrative strategy, this session is for you.
What You’ll Get:
A Human-Powered Chapter Review (up to 12 pages)
I’ll read your chapter with a developmental editor’s lens—looking beyond metrics to consider your story’s structure, pacing, clarity, and emotional impact.
Interpretation of Your ProWritingAid Report
No jargon. No confusion. I’ll review your PWA Manuscript Analysis report and translate the most relevant insights into actionable recommendations for your revision.
30-Minute Coaching Call
We’ll meet on Zoom for a focused discussion of what’s working, what’s not, and how to move forward. You’ll leave with confidence, clarity, and concrete next steps.
A 1-Page Summary with Your Revision Roadmap
I’ll send you a written recap that highlights:
- Your chapter’s key strengths
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Specific areas to improve
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Targeted revision suggestions
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Recommended next moves
Why Add a Coach?
ProWritingAid helps you diagnose issues. I help you understand them in context—and fix them with strategy.
Software can flag adverbs and sentence length. But it takes a coach to say: “This scene is technically fine—but it lacks tension and your stakes need sharpening.”
This session blends the best of both worlds: data + depth.
Book-and-Go Workflow (No Discovery Call Needed):
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Click Book Now and complete payment.
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Receive a quick intake form to upload your chapter and ProWritingAid report.
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Schedule your 30-minute Zoom session.
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Meet with me, get feedback, and walk away with a roadmap.
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Receive your follow-up summary within 48 hours.
Best For:
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Middle grade writers using ProWritingAid who want to translate data into revision
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Authors stuck on a chapter and unsure how to apply style or pacing insights
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Writers who want clear, human, expert feedback—fast