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For Middle Grade Writers Who Want
More Than Metrics
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​You’ve run your chapter through ProWritingAid—and now you’ve got data. Lots of it.

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But what do you do with a style score of 73%? Or a pacing spike in paragraph four? Or that passive voice flag that doesn’t feel quite right?

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If you’re revising a middle grade manuscript and want help turning the numbers into narrative strategy, this session is for you.

What You’ll Get:

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A Human-Powered Chapter Review (up to 12 pages)
I’ll read your chapter with a developmental editor’s lens—looking beyond metrics to consider your story’s structure, pacing, clarity, and emotional impact.

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Interpretation of Your ProWritingAid Report
No jargon. No confusion. I’ll review your PWA Manuscript Analysis report and translate the most relevant insights into actionable recommendations for your revision.

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30-Minute Coaching Call
We’ll meet on Zoom for a focused discussion of what’s working, what’s not, and how to move forward. You’ll leave with confidence, clarity, and concrete next steps.

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A 1-Page Summary with Your Revision Roadmap
I’ll send you a written recap that highlights:

  • Your chapter’s key strengths

  • Specific areas to improve

  • Targeted revision suggestions

  • Recommended next moves

Why Add a Coach?

 

ProWritingAid helps you diagnose issues. I help you understand them in context—and fix them with strategy.

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Software can flag adverbs and sentence length. But it takes a coach to say: “This scene is technically fine—but it lacks tension and your stakes need sharpening.”

 

​This session blends the best of both worlds: data + depth.

Book-and-Go Workflow (No Discovery Call Needed):

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  1. Click Book Now and complete payment.

  2. Receive a quick intake form to upload your chapter and ProWritingAid report.

  3. Schedule your 30-minute Zoom session.

  4. Meet with me, get feedback, and walk away with a roadmap.

  5. Receive your follow-up summary within 48 hours.

Best For:

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  • Middle grade writers using ProWritingAid who want to translate data into revision

  • Authors stuck on a chapter and unsure how to apply style or pacing insights

  • Writers who want clear, human, expert feedback—fast

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