BOOK COACHING
Your Story Matters
You Have a Story. Let’s Get It Written.
Your middle grade story deserves to shine. Whether you're drafting your first novel or deep in revision, my personalized coaching gives you the structure, expertise, and support you need to move forward with confidence.
With actionable feedback and a clear, step-by-step plan, you'll gain the confidence and skills to elevate your writing and navigate the path to publication.
Coaching Packages
Package 1: First Draft Coaching – Getting to "The End"
(For writers stuck in the messy middle or struggling to finish a first draft.)
OVERVIEW:
Writing a middle grade novel is joyful, challenging—and often overwhelming, especially once the excitement of the beginning wears off. If you've started your story but lost momentum, stalled in the middle, or keep rewriting Chapter One instead of moving forward, this coaching package is designed to help you finish your draft.
Middle grade stories are meant to grow and evolve—but that only happens if you get the full draft down. With personalized coaching, structured accountability, and expert guidance rooted in middle grade craft, you’ll build the skills and mindset to push through perfectionism, reconnect with your story, and complete your first draft with confidence.
WHAT YOU'LL GET:
Weekly Goal-Setting & Progress Tracking
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Clear, manageable writing goals tailored to your book and schedule.
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Personalized strategies to break through creative blocks and keep going.
Bi-Weekly 60-Minute Coaching Calls
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One-on-one coaching sessions to troubleshoot plot challenges, character development, and writing hurdles.
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Expert feedback on story structure, pacing, and keeping momentum.
Accountability & Motivation
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Regular check-ins and deadlines to keep you writing.
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Practical tools to overcome procrastination, perfectionism, and fear of failure.
First Draft Completion Strategy
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A clear roadmap to finish your draft without getting lost in endless rewrites.
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A plan for what comes next—whether it’s revising, working with an editor, or taking a break before the next phase.
PERFECT FOR:
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Writers who have started their book but feel stuck in the middle.
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Authors struggling with motivation, self-doubt, or perfectionism.
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Writers who want structured support and accountability to finish their first draft.
INVESTMENT:
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$500 per month (Minimum 3-month commitment, cancel any time after.)
Package 2: Full Manuscript Evaluation / Developmental Edit
(For authors who want expert-level feedback to refine their manuscript before querying or self-publishing.)
OVERVIEW:
Agents receive thousands of submissions each year—especially in the competitive middle grade market. To stand out, you need more than just a good premise. Your manuscript must be polished, emotionally resonant, and tailored to the expectations of both young readers and publishing professionals.
This Full Manuscript Evaluation & Developmental Edit provides expert feedback, deep craft insight, and a clear roadmap for revision. Whether you’re preparing to query or pursuing a small press path, this package ensures your middle grade story is structurally sound, voice-appropriate, and ready to compete at a professional level.
WHAT YOU'LL GET
Comprehensive Editorial Letter (6-10 pages)
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A professional deep dive into structure, plot, pacing, character development, themes, and narrative flow.
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Strategic solutions to enhance story clarity, emotional impact, and reader engagement.
In-Line Comments Throughout Your Manuscript
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Scene-by-scene, sentence-level feedback to show you exactly where your writing excels and where it can improve.
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Clear, actionable revision suggestions tailored to your voice and storytelling style.
60-Minute Follow-Up Strategy Call
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A one-on-one coaching session to discuss feedback, answer questions, and develop a customized revision plan.
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Ensures you walk away with clarity, confidence, and next steps for success.
PERFECT FOR:
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Authors who want professional-level feedback to elevate their manuscript.
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Authors preparing to query or self-publish.
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Writers who have revised multiple times but need expert guidance to identify weaknesses and refine their story.
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Storytellers seeking high-touch, strategic feedback instead of generic, surface-level comments.
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Authors who value both deep editorial insight and one-on-one coaching to support their revision process.
INVESTMENT:
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$1999
Package 3: Ongoing Monthly Coaching for Revisions
(For middle grade writers who need structured guidance and accountability to navigate the revision process with confidence.)
OVERVIEW:
Revising a manuscript can feel overwhelming, but you don’t have to do it alone. This monthly coaching program provides the personalized support, structure, and accountability you need to navigate revisions with confidence. Whether you're refining plot and character arcs, tightening prose, or strengthening themes, this program ensures steady progress with expert guidance every step of the way.
Through bi-weekly coaching calls, goal-setting, and structured accountability, you’ll gain the clarity and momentum needed to bring your book closer to publication—without getting stuck in endless rewrites. Stay in the program for as long as you need, with a minimum commitment of three months.
WHAT YOU'LL GET:
Weekly Goal-Setting & Action Plans
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Clear, structured goals tailored to your manuscript’s needs.
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Step-by-step guidance to keep your revisions focused and manageable.
Bi-Weekly 60-Minute Coaching Calls
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Personalized, one-on-one sessions to troubleshoot challenges, refine your work, and strengthen your manuscript.
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Expert insight on plot, character development, pacing, and narrative structure.
Accountability Check-Ins & Firm Deadlines
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Ongoing support to help you stay on track and avoid procrastination.
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Regular progress assessments to ensure forward momentum.
PERFECT FOR:
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Authors feeling stuck in the revision process who need expert guidance to move forward efficiently.
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Writers who want structured accountability to prevent procrastination and make steady progress.
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Authors seeking personalized coaching to refine their manuscript and ensure it reaches its full potential.
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Storytellers committed to producing a polished, publication-ready book through a structured and supportive process.
INVESTMENT:
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$500 per month (Minimum 3-month commitment, cancel any time after.)
Package 4: Pitching Your Manuscript
(For authors preparing to query literary agents who need a polished, compelling submission package to stand out.)
OVERVIEW:
Ready to pitch your middle grade manuscript to literary agents but unsure how to craft a compelling, professional submission package? This four-week coaching program provides expert guidance to help you perfect your query letter and synopsis, ensuring they stand out in a crowded marketplace.
Through personalized coaching, in-depth feedback, and strategic revisions, you'll gain the confidence and clarity needed to approach agents with polished, market-ready materials that increase your chances of representation.
WHAT YOU'LL GET:
Weekly 60-Minute Coaching Calls
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One-on-one sessions focused on crafting, refining, and perfecting your query letter and synopsis.
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Expert advice on how to position your manuscript effectively for agents and publishers.
Comprehensive Feedback on Drafts
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Detailed, professional critique to enhance clarity, voice, and market alignment.
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Iterative revisions to ensure your submission materials are strong, engaging, and polished.
Submission-Ready Deliverables
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A final, professionally crafted query letter tailored to your book.
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A compelling, polished synopsis that effectively summarizes your manuscript’s key elements.
PERFECT FOR:
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Authors preparing to query literary agents who want to maximize their chances of getting requests.
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Writers struggling with query letter and synopsis writing who need expert guidance to make them stand out.
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Storytellers who want a strong, strategic submission package that aligns with market expectations.
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Authors serious about securing representation and taking their publishing career to the next level.
INVESTMENT:
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$999
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Quick Wins for Writers
Whether you’re refining a key chapter or perfecting your query letter, these Quick Wins for Writers give you expert feedback with a quick turnaround—so you can keep moving forward with confidence. Designed for writers who want immediate, actionable insights, these services help you strengthen your manuscript and submission materials without a big commitment.
Quick Win #1: Chapter Edit
WHAT YOU'LL GET:
One round of in-line edits on a 12-page chapter plus a short summary outlining key issues and suggestions for next steps.
WHY IT'S VALUABLE:
Get clear on how to revise your chapter, strengthen your storytelling, and improve clarity, structure, and flow.
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Turnaround Time: 2 days
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Investment: $149
PERFECT FOR AUTHORS WHO:
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Want expert guidance on a key chapter before committing to a full manuscript evaluation.
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Struggle with pacing, voice, or clarity and need professional feedback.
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Are serious about refining their manuscript for querying or self-publishing.
Need deeper support? If you’re looking for comprehensive feedback on your entire book, check out the Full Manuscript Evaluation / Developmental Edit, which provides detailed analysis, coaching, and a strategic revision plan.
Quick Win #2: Query Letter Edit
WHAT YOU'LL GET:
One round of in-line edits on your query letter plus a short summary of next steps to refine and strengthen your pitch.
WHY IT'S VALUABLE:
Agents receive thousands of queries—yours needs to stand out. Get expert feedback to craft a compelling letter that grabs attention.
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Turnaround Time: 2 days
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Investment: $149
PERFECT FOR AUTHORS WHO:
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Want to maximize their chances of getting manuscript requests from agents.
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Struggle with crafting a clear, engaging, and professional query letter.
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Are preparing to submit and need expert guidance to make their pitch shine.
Want full submission support? If you’re preparing to query, the Pitching Your Manuscript Coaching Package helps you refine your entire submission strategy, including your query letter, synopsis, and positioning.