BETH MCMULLEN

​Need a fast, affordable way to improve your writing? Whether you’re refining a key chapter or perfecting your query letter, these Quick Wins for Writers give you expert feedback with a quick turnaround—so you can keep moving forward with confidence.

Designed for writers who want immediate, actionable insights, these services help you strengthen your manuscript and submission materials without a big commitment.

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Quick Win #1: Chapter Edit

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✅ What You’ll Get: One round of in-line edits on a 12-page chapter plus a short summary outlining key issues and suggestions for next steps.
✅ Why It’s Valuable: Get clear on how to revise your chapter, strengthen your storytelling, and improve clarity, structure, and flow.
✅ Turnaround Time: 2 days
✅ Investment: $149

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🔗 Perfect for authors who:

• Want expert guidance on a key chapter before committing to a full manuscript evaluation.

• Struggle with pacing, voice, or clarity and need professional feedback.

• Are serious about refining their manuscript for querying or self-publishing.

 

📌 Need deeper support? If you’re looking for comprehensive feedback on your entire book, check out the Full Manuscript Evaluation / Developmental Edit, which provides detailed analysis, coaching, and a strategic revision plan.

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👉 Start improving your manuscript today—book your Chapter Edit now!

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Quick Win #2: Query Letter Edit

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✅ What You’ll Get: One round of in-line edits on your query letter plus a short summary of next steps to refine and strengthen your pitch.
✅ Why It’s Valuable: Agents receive thousands of queries—yours needs to stand out. Get expert feedback to craft a compelling letter that grabs attention.
✅ Turnaround Time: 2 days
✅ Investment: $150

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🔗 Perfect for authors who:

• Want to maximize their chances of getting manuscript requests from agents.

• Struggle with crafting a clear, engaging, and professional query letter.

• Are preparing to submit and need expert guidance to make their pitch shine.

 

📌 Want full submission support? If you’re preparing to query, the Pitching Your Manuscript coaching package helps you refine your entire submission strategy, including your query letter, synopsis, and positioning.

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👉 Take the first step toward getting an agent—book your Query Letter Edit now!

 

📅 Not sure which Quick Win is right for you? Schedule a Free Discovery Call and let’s find the best way to support your publishing goals!

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🔗 Book Your Free Call Today

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